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“Welcome to Private I Café!”


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:damphyr: This is a .swf file. It will run in adobe to flash player.
:damphyr: Click the Private I Café Logo to see the artwork.
:damphyr: Please patiently wait for the actual artwork.
:damphyr: Please do not copy and post to other websites.
:damphyr: I’ve used a .swf file to avoid .jpg copying and web distribution.


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With faces like those, they don’t seem to look inviting. :XD: Hahaha! These three major characters are in front of the Private I Café entrance.

As promised *for several times*, here’s my update on my new webmanga project. It is my first attempt to write and conceptualize stories for a detective genre. Hopefully, I won’t screw this. This is the biggest challenge for me until now because I’m still fixing some story holes. D8>

Finally I was able to color this one. It took me a gap of forever from line art to color rendering. Although, I felt a little rusted. Critics are welcome but please be gentle. Onegai... *Ero Ero man mode…* :XD: :XD: :XD:



Private I Café © Ray Adrian Magbanua
Costume Designs © Kristine Marie Magbanua and Angelica Magbanua
Private I Cafe Intro Music © Paulo Coelho (commission )

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:iconnokia413:
~nokia413 Oct 23, 2012  Hobbyist
I like the music*o* The story must have romance involve, yes? How you draw the character is kind of unique. Your Welcome XD
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:iconbethanna:
I really love detective stories and this looks very promising, espiecially the mix of art and mystery.
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:iconharajukulover55:
is this song from Nightmare's boggie song thingy?
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:iconangelstale:
Mood: Joy ~AngelsTale Aug 1, 2008   Digital Artist
uy! ganda ng music X3
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:iconexzentrizitat:
This project is incredibly well-done thus far! En if you plan on 32 pages each month (wow),good luck with its completion,it's likely to turn out well. Also,the setup you've used for the cover & artwork is unfamiliar,a first encounter personally here on DA,very impressive!

Although you've already acknowledged that the 3 managers have such serious,worried and/rather uninviting expressions,it seems as if that's part of the story,or maybe even foreshadowing a specific upcoming event. There's a bit of suspense which is good as it may inspire interest & encourage future readers.

The colouring,shading,fabric folds of the clothing and shadows/reflections in the windows are all very well-done. It's a very minute detail,but the occasional white strands in the hair seem a bit odd.Perhaps this was for contrast or lighting? Maybe just use a lighter shade of the colour instead of strict white?

Nice work! :D
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:iconoso-oso:
32 pages per month D: *faints*
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:iconraykosen:
~Raykosen Apr 14, 2008  Professional General Artist
D8> But you'll be there to help me out! *ambush* :XD: :XD: :XD: :XD:
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:iconoso-oso:
lol ambush? ano to? pokemon? XD
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:iconmercy-waters:
I like the expressions!
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